I completely forgot about the comma so had to hastily add it as graffiti, but I don't think it looks too bad.
Saturday 15 January 2011
Day 15
I completely forgot about the comma so had to hastily add it as graffiti, but I don't think it looks too bad.
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I can't believe we haven't yet finished the first sentence! I predict the next five words are "and promptly sat on his face".
But she's thirty paces in front of him, Ariane, so how promptly could she do that?
Leaving aside the fact that those are six words, obviously...
Six words, but all narratively possible if the initial thirty paces were minuscule.
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